Thursday, November 10, 2011

Is this a run-on sentence?

Yes, it is run-on. How about, "I believe that if the incoming freshman cl read - or reread - The Catcher in the Rye, they would gain a better sense of self. In that achievement, they would be joining at least one great literary character; Holden Caulfield, the timeless embodiment of teenage yearning and angst."?

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